I'm too far gone, love hit me like a stone. More or less like a boulder, took a lot of weight off my shoulder. There's no turning back, love is the right track. And if it's not, this world would be all cold and no hot.
True love can be a tease, neither is it an ease. One thing about it, you won't totally freeze. When we're frozen stiff, we can get stuck with the if. When we experience spring, summer and fall, at least life will enthral.
Hate is a dead end street, love is an avenue sweet. Both are filled with trap, they both can make us zap. I feel safer in the love zone, in hate I felt completely gone.
Forgive me for this suggestion. I would change the last word to 'alone' if I were being totally critical. Take it or leave it. I thought the premise of the poem was great.
Chanti
All hate has its roots in fear and fear renders us powerless. Love, on the other hand, takes us to a higher plane and also makes us feel good about our decisions. There are still pitfalls with love, but it is the understanding with which we face those traps that lead to personal growth.
Take care,
Sherry
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
Eileen
Best regards,
Leland
Regis
Chanti
Hate to say it but send me a map to that love zone...I landed in that black hole in the Ozone.....lol!!
Love Tinks
Take care,
Sherry