My wife and I came home after celebrating the Thanksgiving holiday with family. I'm about shot, we've been together for about two straight days. Everything went ok because I refused to overreact to my wife or our families.
After we walked in the door it started, we got to teasing each other a little about eating so much. The teasing got a little rough and my wife got kind of nasty. I asked her how she could act the way she was acting when she did me the same way or worse. Finally I told her I didn't appreciate her mean attitude because I didn't do her that way when she teased me. It kind of pissed me off the way she was acting, so I opened my laptop up and wrote a poem called "Joking," to help deal with the situation. After I wrote the poem one of our peers decided to throw a slur at it which I did not appreciate because after kissing our families butts and my wifes behind, I was in no mood for slurs, honest reviews but not slurs. So goes the poetic psychology behind this poem.
I run to my pen and ink, too poetically word what I think. Maybe not the stupid, but moreso the cupid. I believe in love and peace, not being led by the devils lease. I might verse in the best, try to forget the stupid rest. Even though I might be pissed, I try not to turn butt to be kissed.
All the time I'm writing, I try to ink away fighting. But it's hard to pull out a tooth, cover up the real truth. My poetry contains a lot of psychology, it helps guide my biology, then there'll be less apology.
Don't slur me in review, I might come for your butt too chew. My poetry you may not like, in which case take a hike. Don't force out Mr Hide, bring out my bad side. I don't write for attention, nor do I need honorable mention.
I might already be dealing, trying not to start too squealing. Or acting like a fool, with the devil on the drool. Problems is I might flip, go on a mean evil trip. Trip out on your azz, so my poetry
Critisism is GRowth!
I look at it ALL in a Positive light~
I love your honesty!
Forthrightness and Openeness Grady~
WEll said!
WEll felt!
Don't change a thing!
WRite on, on and on!
Warmest Blessings!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Your a poet Grady
a good one too
criticisim come with it
I enjoy both sides
Don't let it get to you
Peace
William
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2006
Okay, I finally stopped my laughing, and I think I can write now. Your poem was absolutely hylarious; and as for me, if I get a bad review I simply wipe it away.Who needs the crap, just push the botton. God Bless, Holly
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2006
It's a mixture of folk in any walk of life, but a sledginging, just hit remove, and off into the either it goooooooossssssss...
I look at it ALL in a Positive light~
I love your honesty!
Forthrightness and Openeness Grady~
WEll said!
WEll felt!
Don't change a thing!
WRite on, on and on!
Warmest Blessings!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
love tinka
a good one too
criticisim come with it
I enjoy both sides
Don't let it get to you
Peace
William
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