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nude
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It was just another day,
early in the morning sun.
She danced nude,
all she wanted was fun.
She wanted to feel the
warm morning breeze,
there was no intentions
to really tease.


But tease she did,
to the eyes watching.
Her figure was amazing,
certainly eye catching.
Her admirer couldn't take no more,
he had to try and score.


As soon as he made his move
toward this beautiful queen,
here vision disappeared,
no longer visible to be seen.
He kept on reaching too hug,
then realized it was only rug.


Down on the floor he lay,
in pain from his fall.
This happens everytime
 she comes too call.
Surely a sweet dream,
ending in sour cream.


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 Reviews of "nude"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Whahahahaha...dang...got to love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Was he drunk? Suffering from illusions? Captivating poem. Victor

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Where can I get a rug like that?

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Personally I like a sour dream ending in sweet cream, but to each their own...;) ED

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
HAHAHA, MY KINDA DREAM..

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
LOL, you had me going there for awhile, One! Excellent, fun poem.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on November 26, 2006
LOL Great ending! I love your start too!
WArm HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Very good 'strip-tease' through prose.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Oh OnePoet ... Thanks for sharing your dream, so tastefully done; and fun too! May she manifest for you; or perhaps you prefer her in your dreams ... the 'perfect',untouchable dream woman.
Love and real hugs to you, straight from the heart...
Suzie :-D

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
hahahahaha Too funny! I'm still laughing.


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