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Is This World Real ?
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sometimes I wonder, especially through all the blunder.


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Many times I find,
this world a thrill,
sometimes I feel,
it couldn't be real.
God is felt
but has never been seen.
Santa Claus isn't real,
he has been seen.
The devil is felt
but not seen by the naked eye.
Man is live & in living color,
his life can be taken over a dollar.

The bible is full of stories,
no man living witnessed its glories.
Flesh and blood is real,
witnessed by the pain we feel.
So is this earth of sod,
which we were made a part.

Some take life too serious,
they really get furious.
Others don't take life serious enough,
until it becomes really rough.
In these words of verse,
I present a wondering curse.

The good seems most fitting,
but the bad needs to be quitting.
It's hard to stomach all the death,
too many poor
others with all the wealth.
Life with all its good and shame,
seems more like a board game.
And I'm in it,
everyday trying too win it.
But basically taking a bruising,
sometimes losing.

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Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 25, 2006
That's real life, we are rich or poor, good or evil, believers or non-believers. Sometimes we win, others we lose. It has always been the same. Don't think it will change. Peace and happiness to you and yours. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on December 25, 2006
great write my friend, for many ponder upon these questions, many do not believe if they cannot see...Jesus can be felt within the heart, through good deeds from friends, through the love of our family, through the miraculous birth of our children and grandchildren, through peace in our mind heart and soul...but yet many refuse to believe...only requires the faith the size of a mustard seed...your write is very inspiring and you are so right my friend, it is sad when one see's the poor and hungry...many of which is fulfilling of the bible, for there shall be wars and rumors of wars, famines and earth quakes in diverse places...but this is not the end, for when they speak peace...sudden destruction...I just want to be ready to go...You've given the reader much to think about, very thought provoking. Great write!
Blessings and Merry Christmas,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 25, 2006
As real as it getz methinks Grady!!

Love and Harmony Tinks

Reviewed on December 25, 2006
"Is This World Real"

Powerful rhymthmic narrative carries it's own weight in the world here. The ideas incorporated are all too real yet intertwine with faith, hope, and heartfelt common sense. *One thank you for sharing your work today~wonderful.

Virtual Christmas hugs,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm


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