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Painted Picture
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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No paint was really wasted...


In the picture they all were
smiling and have fun.
In reality the posing group was
frowning and having none.
Could it be the picture painted
was in reality tainted?


The picture hung on the wall
the subjects sat in the hall.
The music was playing 
the atmosphere was decaying.
No one was dancing on the floor
the artist wanted to hit the door.


While he was painting,
they all held their smiles
without fainting.
The artist all of a sudden awoke,
it was a nightmare,
he hadn't painted one stroke.
He walked over to his canvas bare
just stood and gave it a long stare.


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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Well done, as always sweet sweet man...Hugsssss

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Is this you?
This was Kewl
A gem to treasure!

WArmly, Lady Sheeeoox
I love your chosen words and feelings here!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Only a nightmare...I think I know the feeling!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
luved the mind illustration of the optical illusion

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
So mind in real matters, and so true to life...I think I have a few of those paintings lying around here somewhere...SMILE! say cheese, as the mold drools from its blood exixtence, because it thinks it has to paint all the pictures to make us look good!
Thoughts run rampant here...Well done TOO!:)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
One,

Exceptional poetry; intriguing, thought provoking lines--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
This is exceptional, my friend, and says so much. It's haunting, with a dream quality that I can relate to. Like writing a poem, a really good poem, and then waking up to the reality it was only a dream -- and not being able to remember what the words to the poem were!! Very well done!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on March 22, 2007
So many meanings are buried between the lines of this poem. thanks OnePoet


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