The perfect man realizes there is no such thing as perfection, then moves to make up for the correction. The perfect man, also has an A, B and C plan. A being the number one uno, B following up as the next to know. C being the last leg, placing him in the position to beg.
I went through A,B and C, had to get myself back together before the count of one, two, three. The count past me running, being a failure knock me stunning. I found myself down at the count of ten, lost in space still trying to win.
I faced the drummer, some of the things I was doing couldn't have been dumber. Alcohol was about the worse, the other stupidity added to the curse. They say you can't keep a good man down, maybe this is why I'm still around. Still around far from perfection, surviving through my love connection.
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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 25, 2007
Hang in there. Life is a roller coaster ride. Much more to see ever day. Good effort. Thanks for sharing.
How'd I miss this? Grady I have always loved your down to earth writes. This one makes it clear a man needs a play to stay number one! And no one is perfect.
A great write my friend, we all need a plan to keep us in line and all have to revisit the plan every now and then. Enjoyed this cleverly written write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
The only Perfect Man was the One who died on the Cross at Calvary for our sins. Excellent write, Grady; no, we aren't perfect, nor will we ever be so. We're human; we make mistakes. Let's hope we can learn from some of them in our lives. Very well done poem, One; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
Only the strong survive also. Good words here. Lady J
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God Bless,
Lew
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love Tinka
Cheer up!!!
Georg
Good write Grady
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)