Born a baby boy of need,
birthed from my father and mothers seed.
Started out sucking the titty,
grew older only to struggle in the city.
Everyday was a dog gone hassle,
to survive I had to fight, struggle and wrestle.
My ends were always short,
but I never would use drugs or snort.
At one time I did grab the bottle,
found out alcohol didn't go with my throttle.
It was hard to quit drinking,
it was a need I couldn't seem to quit thinking.
Big boy grew to be a man,
found out that I needed a good plan.
Couldn't quite stomach the pistol in my hand,
So I got educated instead,
still my ends stayed in the red.
When we're first born from our parents seed,
we have no idea how great our need.
But we find out the cost,
deal with it or remain lost.
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Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Welcome to the Big City
ditto my existence, I too made it without drugs or a criminal record
Joined the Marines, saw the light, went forward and never looked back, never embrace the old hood (El Barrio)ever again.
I thank God for my parental up bringing
Thank you Grady for your oustanding write
Peace Brother
Great write.
Sounds to me like you are finding yourself.
But we find out the cost,
deal with it or remain lost.
Deal with it or remain lost. This is good advice.
God Bless,
LEw
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ditto my existence, I too made it without drugs or a criminal record
Joined the Marines, saw the light, went forward and never looked back, never embrace the old hood (El Barrio)ever again.
I thank God for my parental up bringing
Thank you Grady for your oustanding write
Peace Brother
William
Sounds to me like you are finding yourself.
But we find out the cost,
deal with it or remain lost.
Deal with it or remain lost. This is good advice.
God Bless,
LEw