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Holding Water
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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8 glasses a day

In this world it's easy to say phuck it,
from phonies and lies of a leaking bucket.
Even when we barter,
somethings don't hold water.
Our earth holds water in
its lakes, rivers, oceans and streams,
flowing water of idle dreams,
quite a few of its inhabitants day and nightly screams.

Pregnant coming water broke,
poor baby birthed to life almost choke.
Smacked on the azz for what it's worth,
crying baby living brought to birth.
As sure as the rain falls from the sky,
it's water dropping on a body born to die.

Rain water soaks into the ground deep,
even there it will not keep.
Through a process of evaporation,
poor child looks to his father for an explanation,
only to get a hypercritical summation.
On paper the school house grades,
in a deck of  cards the ace trumps spades.

Dealt from the hands of a crooked dealer,
how was one to know the water went into
the mouth of a born killer.
Processed through a body came out pee,
same eyes watching you and me.
The only water surely held in a glass,
idle wishes sweet dreams pass.

OnepoetGem

 


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 Reviews of "Holding Water"
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
This is so philosophical. Water is life and death. What a journey.

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
This definitely made me think... nice writing about the essence of water.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Oh my,Excellent writing sweet sweet man,missed ya darlin...Hugssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Positively, absolutely, thought provoking. I lespecially loved the second stanza, the part of the baby dropping on its azz made me laugh abit...I don't think it should but it did. Great one!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
well written--there is a deepness to this--i like the way you have spun the tale of birth and living.


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