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Garden of Pleading
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I found the Garden of Eden, my search is over. Just a poem, they call it verse, everybody got a right to figure for themselves. I say we still in the garden, God just made life harden, because of disobedience.


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The Garden of Eden
for centuries we've been
in it praying a pleading.
Getting tornadoed, hurricaned
dying and bleeding.
Torchered & terrorized
with hair lines receeding,
trying to get our father to
give up what
we've been needing.

I'll beg your pardon,
this whole earth is the garden.
We never were kicked out,
we've just had to
learn our way about.
All the apple trees are
still growing,
the snakes presence
is spiritually glowing.
We've even juiced the apple,
to a sweet drink called snapple.

No need to search,
most of us believe in church,
the devil is still a lurch.
some of us pray,
so the devil won't
completely lead us astray.
Our father which art in heaven,
dice rolled snake eyes,
flipped pass seven.

Help!

OnepoetGem

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Garden of Pleading"
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
I like that you mix slight humor all the while stating some very serious issues...

Reviewed on May 21, 2008
This is GREAT!
I love this One!
Advice or NOT Advice,
WE take what we need! Smiling!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace! Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Positive! and STay STrong!

Reviewed on May 21, 2008
A unique idea about our "garden", Gem Troubadour. I'll be more cautious what I plant and cultivate in mine :o) Enjoyed your soulful slant in this poem...yes POEM!
Blessings ~~ Micke

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
It's great Grady
when someone writes what's on his/her mind
You write your thoughts and expressions well
Peace Brother

William


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
fun writing!!!

Reviewed on May 20, 2008
the Russian Azzhole is referring to one of my lines in the last part of my poem, it went as such,

no need to search
just get your butt in church

I changed it because it sounded to much like advice, which I don't give. However a lot of my verse sounds like advice. Sobeit, it's part of my style. The Russian can't even spell piece.(pieace)

Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Powerful write, Gem; very well penned as always!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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