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Handling Disappointment
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Want to get a good start on
handling disappointment
Just start writting verse on AD
Hardly any reviews you'll see
You'll either be loved or hated
each and everyday debated
At times you might feel sedated

That is if anyone visits your den
sometimes you'll feel like
breaking your pen
You'll wonder why the heck
you keep writing
Sooner or later you'll figure
writing verse is exciting

One things for sure
the disappointment will cure
or you'll give in to failure
Even if you haven't failed
get use to being nailed
Volunteer for the hammer
because either way
writing verse is a slammer

Slammed good
slammed bad
One poem you're happy
next poem you might be sad
Versatility counts big
If none of the above apply
Consider yourself lucky
you've earned your
rubber ducky

OnepoetGem


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 Reviews of "Handling Disappointment"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on July 30, 2008
As an author, I can relate to this poem. We need the feedback. But I would add that the feedback might not come at the time of the first posting, or so I've found. I think, judging from RT discussions, readership is down. Nonetheless, I like the way your write puts it all together -- expressing the feelings most of us have at one time or another. R

Reviewed on July 30, 2008
Seems summer brings a decrease in comments, when life is busier or even time-off for illnesses (less time on puter). Just keep writing, Grady, and don't sweat the small stuff - your works are always enjoyed :o)
Blessings - Micke

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
I love who you are sweet sweet man,stay the way you are ..you're the best.. stay safe and well..Hugssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
If we always bat a thousand, Gem, the game's no fun. Or fixed.
-gene.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
hey I never miss one of your writes...but sometimes have to let the comments go...or,or,or...nevermind!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Dear Grady, I read everything I see posted by you, sometimes on the run but no time to comment, you are read and appreciated even if I don't always have time to comment.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
This is a very straight forward poem,I like how you express your feelings in this poem.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
I like this one, very honest and bold, I think that's why the people who like you, like you...express yoursefl!


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