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Severe Feather
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Some very small things can bring down a man, or a whole society. One little germ can wipe out a whole population, with no known explanation.
Everything was going well God could tell but he knew man was doomed to fail Lurking in the shadows was the angel of hell First man dwelled in the garden with not a single worry There was plenty other fruit including sweet cherry Eve enticed Adam to bite one apple never knew it would end up juice in todays snapple or that eating it would forever cause man to suffer One red sweet delicious apple offer from the tree of knowledge Thousands of years man suffers with woman together all because of one feather Adam never got a chance to eat the whole tree After he enjoyed one apple he thought was free OnepoetGem

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Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

A Gem of a writing! I am tempted to read more of your stuff.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Hey, don't blame it all on us...LOL!!! Temptation is only a state of mind; it was Adam who was weak. Just because there is a fresh chocolate cake sitting on the counter doesn't mean I have to eat it...OH, uhmm...gotta go. Aaaa chocolate cake is calling me, I mean, someone's at the door..yeah that's it! LOL. Very good write.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

WEll done my friend, much said within the lines of this powerful write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

"Some very small things can bring down a man, or a whole society." True, and these days -- still-- mankind is dis-obedient to God's instructions! Good poem, Gem!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

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