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Church isn't Enough
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I know people personally who go in the church every sunday and walk out still hating and full of stupidty. Right in my own family, in a fraction, three fourths of the ones I know. Kind of bad, so if you got a better fraction count yourself blessed.

Man has this big dark
hole in his soul and being
makes no difference
whether poor man or king
Man thirst for everything
very seldom wants nothing
It's always got to
be something

God tries to fill the hole
but comes up short in whole
No man is perfectly satisfied
but maybe acts dignified
Jesus died for our sins
this isn't enough for our wins

In the end we lose
no matter how we chose
Whether we pick
God or the devil
man is still doomed for evil
The church stays full
yet most walk out the door
still loaded with the bull

OPG

 


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 Reviews of "Church isn't Enough"
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
Christianity is a personal relationship with Christ and no amount of church going--that is if you're still being hateful and not chrit-like--will make up for that.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on November 9, 2008
True!

hugs,
Gina

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
Yep Keep On Giving Your $$ To The (Satan = Bull) Church...

TRASK

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
This write makes a good point.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
This speak loud and clear. During my 48 years as a pastor I always tried to get persons to see that the attendance at worship was only the beginning.

Larry

Reviewed on November 8, 2008
OPG,

Profound and all too honest write. We've all know people that go to bars on Saturday night, and church on Sunday morning. You've expressed this hypocrisy well.

Mary

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
Bingo, Grady!!! Like I have said elsewhere, right here in Bowie County, Texas, we boast 700+ churches. I have lived here for 13 years, and I have yet to see even one of those churches try to do anything to help the thousands of Texarkana homeless people get back on their feet again. If the churches spoke like Jesus spoke, and acted like Jesus acted, then the churches would be good role models for their congregations. But they do not It is like everything else, it is going to be up to we-the-people to finally be proactive in getting good things done.

Ted


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