Using Love (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

Using Love
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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My wife and I visited someones house we never thought we'd ever enter peacefully, stayed there for two days and left peacefully. For years these people were on our chit list. I sound like a preacher on this one, got a problem with that?

Jesus used love he could have prayed to God to give us the shove Instead he asked God to forgive us because we did not know what we do Man still doesn't know what he is doing until this day We aren't God's blessed some of us are devil dressed All we know how to do is evily express I for one do confess but every day I work on my redress Praying and asking for fogiveness If we can't forgive our fellow man How do we expect God to forgive us Here's what I found out The more I understand and forgive others the better I feel myself The more I forgive myself the lighter my burden I feel more at peace disconnected from the devils lease No more revenge thinking which will have the eyes blinking Those I wanted to smack I gave up the stupid attack I have no more worries of the returning flack the boomerang does fly back Looking for inner peace try forgiveness opg

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2009

Wonderful advice my friend, love Holly

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Well said, LadyJ

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

your words are wise and so well stated-your story speaks well of the person you choose to be

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 6, 2009

Beautiful and wiseful poem,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Yes, you sound like a preacher and I not only forgive you, I congratulate you. We need more forgiveness in this world.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Problem Is People Don't Know GRATITUDE,i.e. Wit Chit People (Humans) I'd Rather Say It In Your Face:

Say We Did Say We Did Not...

Keep Em Comen Right On $...

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

wise words beautifully poetized,OPG!...ET

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Gem, a lot of wisdom in this write. Notably:

The more I forgive myself
the lighter my burden

Thanks. -gene.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Hi OPG, A boomerang is right... this sounds like that old adage, "what goes around comes around" and Karma, if I can say that. If there should ever be disconnection, it should be of evils ways... thank you for sharing this, OPG... stay strong,

In Spirit,
Bear