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Hell in Low Waters
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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We don't need hell in high waters, which is the max, the minimum low is enough, to make it anyone has to be tough.


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Getting out of any kind of hell
will give a person a story to tell
Everyones got their own
private hell
most want to leave their stories
there as well
That is if they get out
maybe take good or heavens route

The problem with the devil is
he'll always follow
keep a lump in a person throat
when he swallow
and will try to keep one feeling hollow
Back in the stuff he might wallow

No one really breaks clean
even if they adopt nice over mean
But there will be a feeling of
somewhat relief
having a loving kind belief
Once the bridge is crossed
evil and the devil basically get tossed

opg


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 Reviews of "Hell in Low Waters"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
OPG! You are so prolific,and never write a dull poem,
and always show your wisdom! Kudo's

ETW

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
How true and there are many who quietly leave their story where it lies...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Hell is a good story maker. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
'....HAVING A LOVING KIND OF BELIEF...' IF ONE TRUSTS AND BELIEVES...GOD WILL SURELY SET THEM FREE. VERY GOOD WRITE - ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Oh my...wonderful writing sweet sweet man..I love how you think ..sighhhh....please stay safe and always well and remember you're always in my thoughts...Hugsssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Oh so true, fine pen!

Reviewed on July 27, 2009
OPG,

This shows you can indeed get away from evil, but it's not so easy to stay there. Wonderful write.

Mary


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