SnapShot (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

SnapShot
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Ever feel captured and there's nothing you can do? Quite a few of us are in predicaments that we simply have to endure. Like living in this world of zit, we have to deal with it, one things for sure, we can't quit until death does us apart. And sooner or later it will.

The camera snapped the picture It happened so quick I couldn't escape the snapshot I tried to get out of the lenses view but didn't move fast enough Now I'm captured in a scene where there's no escape Everyone that views the picture will see me there They'll wonder how I was stupid enough to get captured I look back from the picture screaming for help but no one hears my plea The picture gets placed in a picture album As the album is being closed I scream for help again Again my plea for help meets deaf ears I become captured in a dark world knowing there is no escape The house burns down all the way to the ground The picture album burns to a crisp Finally I'm free This photo no one will ever again see opg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 24, 2009

i like thai very much--you described the feeling so well!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

There Is No Escape,i.e Read My Latest--DISEASE...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

This is soooo good, Gem; very well penned! Love it! (And you! :) )

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lori Moore

"Now I'm captured in a scene
where there's no escape."

Life is too often like a picture. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Oh gee, my friend. This makes me wonder what you were doing that made you so object that picture so much. I bet you wish I had not taken the picture of you with the match in your hand. LOL!
Just kidding.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

LOL, GEM, why I mainly take pictures of clouds. THEY don't object or do questionable activities! Although have to wonder about severe storms with hail and tornadoes ... LOL!! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

GREAT PHRASES AND IMAGERY IN THIS WORK THAT DEPICTS ONE BEING CAUGHT IN A PREDICAMENT THAT THEY MISTAKINGLY 'THINK' THEY SHOULDN'T BE IN...SAD. THANK GOD FOR THE 'FIRE'. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

I think we all have had those moments. well said. ladyJ