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Three Strikes
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I wonder how many chances
Adam got before he was really
booted out of the garden
If he didn't get at least three
maybe God should give him a pardon
The Garden of Eden seems
to be the basis of mans downfall
so on we stumble and fall
at times without a stall
especially when the devil
comes to call

Man definitely needs more than
one strike to fail
At the count of two we know
we might be on the way to hell
Once we reach three
the hot place we might see
Whatever hell or heaven
at least the soul will be free

Some men strike out on the
first swing
then end up with nothing
They might lose their head
at the worst end up dead
Then there's always the red
Others reach nine lives of the cat
still holding the bat
firmly planted right where they're at
They refuse to be pinned to the mat
makes no difference whether they
are skinny or fat
On their throne they sat

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 Reviews of "Three Strikes"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
I think God gives us more than 3 chances and still takes us in. Perfect we are not but he wasn't expecting that anyway. Liz

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
I get your point. Though it is my belief that Adam was Strike one for man. I think God has given us more than three strikes and we keep swinging and missing.
God help us.
Lew

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
Maybe sometimes three strikes are two too many...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
Too many get extra chances then blow them and still they are up another time...give me one chance to "make it" and I will just stay there and be happy with whatever I got, though I guess after last year and such I did get a second chance...e


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