Beautiful to watch,
Many pretty colors to see.
Somewhere over the rainbow,
this I know,
there will be no snow.
Somewhere over the rainbow,
their will be a lovely glow.
Glistening so,
Beauty to the
eye,
disappearing
when
it
gets dry.
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Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Grady, lovely description and write. Beauty to behold. Loved it. Bill
Good write!....but I felt the last 4 lines were necessary. It could have just ended with "Beauty to the eye." - This way you can keep the beauty of the rainbow all through this poem.
Just my humble opinion. You don't have to take it.
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Good write!....but I felt the last 4 lines were necessary. It could have just ended with "Beauty to the eye." - This way you can keep the beauty of the rainbow all through this poem.
Just my humble opinion. You don't have to take it.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$