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Our Death
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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(New beginning.)

Body weight bounding
Still surrounding
Our soul
Keeping it on hold
Down on the earth pad
Should we be glad
Should we be sad
Like a prisoner in a cell
We're bound to this earth hell
The ball and chain
All the suffering and pain
The hate
Lifes surprising fate
Don't know
Want know
When our time to go
Comes
Consumes
Entombs
Our earthly shell
Delivering it to heaven or hell
Where you want to go
Do you want to grow
Or regress
To be less
While you're in your body dress
While your soul smiles
Preparing for the miles
The trip
On your final blip
A stroke
A knife poke
Shot by a gun
Burned by the sun
Body on the run
Needing a break
For God's sake
Release me from the pain
Give me a comforting rain
Release my soul
To fly away from this freaking hole
Give me my new beginning
So I can be grinning
Smiling
Styling
About my new plight
Giving me a new light
A new soul fight
I fear no evil
So get back devil
My final soul release
Will be in peace
My soul will fly away
Some nice day
To begin its new play



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 Reviews of "Our Death"
Reviewed by Birdie
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Hurricane of a write .....100% excellent keep em coming Grady !

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Grady, I never know what to expect when I click on your poetry. But I'll tell you this much...I'm never disappointed!

This part really stood out:
"...Do you want to grow
Or regress
To be less..." Words to live by.

Reviewed on May 14, 2003
very good write, grady, and thought provoking! outstanding job, sir! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Very thought provoking. This is excellent Grady..I love your writing.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Good morning, Grady
Tremendous rhyming! You afraid of death? I looking forward to the experience.



tony

Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Great one, Grady! Very creative write indeed!

May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
you have given me some ideas. Thanks

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
Very Very deep write...well done...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
Reaching deep. Very powerful thought in your composition Mr. Grady.

~DAM~


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