Sure I write
I love writing
Got one book wrote under my name
But this writing thing is a pain
I was born into the Kings English
The Kings English wasn't born into me
The French say
The kings butt I will kick
The kings language says
I will kick the kings butt
Makes sense to me
But they say the Kings English is harder to learn for me
The French say
The kings castle I will burn
The kings language says
I will burn the kings castle
If you ask me
All the crap is a hassle
I always am brought back down to Earth with your prose. Born and raised in the English language with the most strict rules anyone could ever be under... I adored this.
Thanks,
Teresa
The poem is wonderful and will be better when you polish it to publish. When you do it, don't forget that English Language is written with punctuation signs, despite any poetical license
My admiration and respect, always.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Nico
Write on!
Leland
I loved this,
Reindeer
Having a working command of the language is a must to a writer of course.
I tend to agree with May Lu, in that, the most effective writing comes about when direct, what I refer to as, conversational english is used.
Nice write here.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)