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LightenYourLoad
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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If you've got the courage, then encourage yourself to lighten your load.
Some things are just dead weight, and should no longer relate.

I lighten my load,
then hit lifes difficult road,
in a better mood,
with a stronger attitude.


The planes losing altitude,
we've got to lighten our load,
or we will crash,
so out goes some of our heavy stash,
along with the trash.


Out goes a ton of guilt,
that we built.
Then goes a ton of worry about sin,
that never was our friend.


NOOOOOOOOO!


don't pitch the forgiveness,
but throw the other mess,
like that ton of stress.


Straighten up and fly light,
if you have the might,
and can get past lifes programmed sight.


Or continue to fly with the group,
in the chicken coup.


Then get caught by the fox,
and put in his dinner box.


G


 


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 Reviews of "LightenYourLoad"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
very different and well written...

Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Beautifully expressed and so wise...loved it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Ahhhhh so excellant and wise a man and poet you are dear Grady!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Yes this one is well worth reading.
LM

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Interestingly true and well written, well done, take care...Mark

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Grady, this is a fine lesson. Better to shed the mold than to let it get old.(lol)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Thanks for the wonderful lesson....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Thanks for the lesson Grady!!

I will see what I can do about it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 21, 2003
What wit way to teach a lesson! I have enjoyed it deep in my heart.

"LightenYourLoad" flows smoothly all the way, delivering its ambrosias. Lovely and profound poem, indeed.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




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