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Pain&Suffering
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Suffer little children to come unto me!

Popped out of the womb,
the human birth tomb,
beginning of my initiation,
so on comes the world,
transfixed illusions,
can't even wait,
until my body totally
exits, blood upon my face,
smacked to birth,
ouch! doctor that hurt,
procrastination of pain,
oh sure, born with legs,
not knowing their function,
I tumble and crawl,
what about that terrible fall?
Momma lost sight,
so I disappeared into the night,
scared as my soul,
hurting in my heart,
pain acknowledged,
but what is it thats making
me feel so bad?
Finally as the years passed,
my legs spoke,
the crawl turn to a walk,
still I stumbled,
fell into the abyss,
watched the bird in flight,
reached for my wings,
none came to light,
what is this?
no wings, so on I fall
finally hitting the bottom,
every bone broke,
but still I live,
so as the mend,
came to offense,
picking myself up once
again, only to suffer,
what is this, can't hardly
breath, seem as though,
yes the choke, hands around
my throat, never knew,
I could function without
oxygen, life surely taught,
until I learned not to get
caught. Fully on the scene,
with the sun in my eyes,
nothing else comes to surprise,
wait a minute, hit by affection,
the human love connection,
pain coming from parts unknown,
cracking out stabs worst,
never knew I was suppose
to hurt this bad,
thought I had malfunctioned,
does this thing of hurt ever
end?


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 Reviews of "Pain&Suffering"
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
I felt the pain in this one; and then I always DO feel pain...have arthritis, but I AM still kicking! LOL Great stuff, Grady! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
I don't think so....Grady!!

If the feeling within the heart does not hurt..it's not love....its emotion!!

Everybody hurts...but some hurts just that little more!!

Hope I am not lost here!!

But guess what?

I am ...usually....most of the time...LOL!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Nope... Never ends...I think of life as an endless test.. we are meant to feel pain.. love.. we are meant to hurt.. to fall.. I think it is part of some bigger plan.. something we all must be prepared for.. Who knows.. maybe we will be the ones to catch others as they fall someday.. maybe we are being trained to empathize.. AWESOME write my friend!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Well written piece..


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