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ShatteredSouls
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Some places will bring us down if we don't have the wisdom to escape.

They're all around,
and very easy found.
Right next to you,
stare right through you.
Their coldness freezing,  
ice storm teasing.
Piercing your inner core,
your heart and soul store.
Like zombies the walking dead,
infecting your head.


I'm still thawing out,
from taking the wrong route.
With all my might,
I ran for the light,
my heart and soul
left an hour before.
They tried to get
me to hit the door,
but oh foolish me,
I wanted to spread some light,
thaw out the frozen sight.


Without my heart and soul,
my mind began to fold,
As it was closing down,
my body started moving around,
searching for the core
of my humanities store.


My brain screamed out,
"get out,
get out before its too late,
nothing you can do here mate!"


So I retreated,
with my exit completed,
my heart and soul 
jumped back inside
my body mold.
warmed me,
resuscitated me.


I'm ok,
for this day.
The adventure
continues.


G


 


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 Reviews of "ShatteredSouls"
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 4, 2003
Great write, Grady. But this out-of-body stuff could get you into trouble. Suppose sometime you can't get it all back together? LOL I guess each piece of you could write with its own style. That'd be something, huh?
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed on October 4, 2003
kewl write; thanks so much for sharing! and thanks for all the kewl reviews, even on my tester story! LOL didn't expect THAT one! LOL
((((HUGGGAHS)))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 4, 2003
Very well written touching piece GradY!!

Your poems read like a story!!

Love Tinka


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