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Tidal Wave
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Life can be kind of shakey at times, especially when you need help.

Tumbling, rolling, totally washed away,
but there was no water in play.
Life preserver I reached for,
your hand grabbed onto mine,
I manage to grab on,
still I'm sucked way upon.
I need air,
but you don't seem to care.
Are you really there?


Totally soaked,
about to give in,
you show your hand again.
Life preserver I grab for it,
I'm still reaching,
still tumbling,
still gasping for air,
are you really there?


I'm splashed by reality,
soaked in totality.
My life is leaving with my breath,
still you step in my path.
You hold your hand out,
I reach out,
Life preserver for me.


You embrace my body,
warm my soul,
tease my heart,
pulling me to life,
as the tidal wave leaves the shore,
you give me breath,
so I have air,
I guess you do care,
at least you were there.


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 Reviews of "Tidal Wave"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 15, 2003
Now this was great Grady!!

This reminds me of my write "Floating Muse"

Enjoyed this one!!

Grag that hand and hold on to it!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
You did get wet I loved this one. Life is a tidal wave.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
What a wonderful write.. It carried me along - worrying about you and then ever so thankful they were there for you in the end. (smile) Loved the way you presented this one.

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Excellent!


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