GoingThroughSomething (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2003

Well penned Grady, such is life.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2003

trying to checkmate.
The master chess player,

..of course..the master chess player ( who is really your higher Self)).is rather difficult to checkmate...think about it Grady..:)

Brilliant write!.....I enjoyed it immensely..quite a talent you have there Grady!

vesna :)

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

ain't that the goodness truth. i like the use of chess as a metaphor. play on, gamesman.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

Good portrayal of daily challenges. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

Problems are a part of everyone's life I suppose
I make the best of it
Well expressed Grady.......

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

Hi Grady..this is a keeper....Great write.....my whole life has been an abstacle course and still it hasn't stopped...every day presents a new problem..I only get through it all with God's help....I could never do it alone...I felt every word here..you just stay strong and have faith....and keep writing....God bless....floria

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

So many traps of play,
just waiting to mess up a day,
ruin a life,
then there's the Samuri knife,
sharp and cunning,
have your behind running

You are right, my friend..
God gives us obstacles to block our
path..but YOU are STRONG , Grady.
I believe in you. You can and will
overcome.

Yf,
*Linda*

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

Sounds like snakes and ladders as well, very poignant

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

"GoingThroughSomething" truly delivering, which I must acknowledge as the rules demand...-Dear Poet and sender: You made me laugh; You made me cry, You made me think; You made me happier!

Thank You, Poet Grady . Morrirson.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

Thought provoking write Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

This is wonderful! Insightful wisdom. Thank you sensei.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

everyone goes through something, but some much more than others. hope you are okay, grady; you are in my prayers! check out my new story, the person writing it is definitely going through something she'd much rather not, but still, she keeps a cool 'tude about herself! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D good write; always a joy reading your words of wisdom!