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SinkingWorld
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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This whole world is sinking,
simply because of stupid thinking.
People dying everywhere,
stink of death in the air.
Everywhere geographically there is hate,
people stubborn and refusing to relate.
Wars over land,
blood flowing in the desert sand.
Intolerance in religion,
every nation under suspicion.


Time for a new way,
sunrise of a brand new day.
The old ways just aren't making it,
they're only breaking it.
If we keep up our present rate,
destruction will certainly be our fate,
then it will be to late.


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 Reviews of "SinkingWorld"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 23, 2003
Amazing write Grady!!

Happy Christmas ny dear firend,!!

May God be with you and your family!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
Very well said. Honest words; sage advice.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
Like the bible says, men's heart will grow cold, and destroy
themselves. If we the people would stop hating one another for
ignorant reasons, maybe, just maybe, we could rightfully influence
other nations.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
Excellent write, Grady. You captured today's headlines to a T. But let me play devil's advocate. I think the situation is even worse. "People dying everywhere ..." Far more are being born than are dying, even in all the wars going on right now. And most of the newcomers will live in the third world unless they can get a VISA (legal or otherwise) to the U.S. The dying is only like a spit in an ocean of births. Now, is this a good thing? Don't think so. Fodder for a major collapse is accumulating. When? Don't know. But your poem will ring ten times louder when it does.
Best regards and happy holidays, my friend.
Leland

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
So true, so true.......
Have Some Happy Holidays!

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
Your mind pumps out these gems...thanks for sharing...amazing work...keep cranking them out...happy holidays...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
You hit the nail on the head Grady didn't even need a
hammer;-)...hopefully you can have some Holiday Happiness!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 22, 2003
Well said Grady. When this will happen only God knows


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