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Ordered To Love
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Do we pay the price for freewill!


God could have ordered us to love each other,
but he did not bother,
good quality of a loving father.
Lead and maybe they will follow,
but instead most remain hollow.


A world of robot manuevers,
push a button love levers.
Given no choice,
freedom of voice.
Man wouldn't be man,
simply a robot in a can.
Boring existence,
everyone in consistency.


Regardless of our pain,
freewill is the main,
so in comes the rain.
Grab an umbrella for cover,
or let God's love recover,
a better life in discover.


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 Reviews of "Ordered To Love"
Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
smart, fun, witty, and wise

thanks,
d.

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Grady, you are right. We would just be little robots if God ordered us to love. We have learn how to do it all on our own and then make the choice. It means so much more with our freewill.

Reviewed on January 27, 2004
nice message, grady, in this write! wonderful job, as always!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
One of your best big guy! ;o)

~ Dana ~

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Free will...thats what He gave us Grady....we are to better ourselves and get through this horrid life....and end up in His arms...great write..floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Beautiful message Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Ywes we do excellent message Grady!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Hi Grady,
Powerful message...


Trixie :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
God could have ordered us to love each other,
but he did not bother,
good quality of a loving father.
Lead and maybe they will follow,
but instead most remain hollow.

EXCELLENT poem, my friend. So much wisdom
in these line's. Sometimes I feel the world
doesn't know what love is anymore....just war's
and starving children. Superb write as always
from you...

Love 'n Peace,
*Linda*



Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
GREAT conveyance of a message!


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