Way down deep, where others are afraid to peep. Then if they do, they'll be afraid of the boo. So would I, still I do defy. I will challenge God, any other life part. The Lord I don't fear, it's the crazy humans near.
I'm an adventurer, I travel to unravel, unravel to travel. I will explore, whatever has a door. If it has none, I'll try to find one.
In the end, death will win. We die anyway, so I have my say. I'll pick a bone with the devil, but refrain from his level. I tell God my true thoughts, even though some are noughts. Eventually my nerve may kill me, but it certainly does thrill me.
Very creative. Nice use of rhyme without it feeling too forced. Enjoyed!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
Grady this is excellent
"death will win.
We die anyway,
so I have my say.
I'll pick a bone with the devil,
but refrain from his level.
I tell God my true thoughts,
even though some are noughts.
Eventually my nerve may kill me,
but it certainly does thrill me.
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The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
Open those doors when ever you can!!
Love Tinka
thanks for the inspiration!
Gina
Love,
Elizabeth
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
"death will win.
We die anyway,
so I have my say.
I'll pick a bone with the devil,
but refrain from his level.
I tell God my true thoughts,
even though some are noughts.
Eventually my nerve may kill me,
but it certainly does thrill me.
So be it!
G