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Shallow Waters
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
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Drowning in
shallow water..
Somehow unable to stand..
Drowning in shallow water..
Unable to reach land..
Trying to swim..
The shore is so
close..
There seems to be a rip tide..
Attached to her soul..
Keeping her in this water..
This water icy cold..
She tries to stand up..
She slowly sinks in quick sand..
She falls..
Water begins to fill her lungs..
She keep trying to swim to shore.
Wondering..
If it is all in her mind..
This shore she thinks she sees..
So close..
Yet far..
How is she to reach it..
When she is getting so very tired.
Tomorrow they will find her..
In inches of water..
Face down and bloated..
She hopes the struggle shows on her face..
Then everyone will know ...
She tried..
The very best she could..
She didn't quit ..
Life quit on her..
As she floats on the top
of shallow waters..
That somehow..
imprisoned her mind, body and soul..
Left here
alone to die..
Drifting
on
shallow tides.


 


 


 


 


 


 




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 Reviews of "Shallow Waters"
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
Excellent write, Erica! Excellent!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
wow!

a powerful write
evoking a particular state of mind

well done!

john+

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
Nice to see you Erica...."life quit on her"
awesome writing...floria

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
very sad and touching
:(

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
Great to see and read you once again/


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