Every smile that she kept.. Every touch she held back.. Her very soul under attack.. by her own inability to react to life.. To look beyond the here and now.. To catch a glimpse of hope .. somehow. To hold it in a secret place.. But she throws hope away in her haste .. to escape.. reality. Time is up.. Remember.. Remember she tried her best.. There was nothing left.. of her heart.. to give. Now she wonders.. If she had one more chance.. Would she choose to live.
It seems we all have these feelings at times
I wonder what I'd do without His strength to
get me through...superb Poem ERica!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
SHE SURE WILL! take it, go go go for it live life, never be pegged down, you're to lovely for that, you are a fighter a winner, only restriction is you holding back, go go go mget life by the balls, it's there for one as young as you, you have a lot to offer, give it to who deserves it!!!!!!!!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
Nice poem about the angst and second-guessing of us fragile humans as we tread every so lightly down the highway of hell called life. Good stuff.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
The message here is so touching Erica..
and the rhyme is impecable...lovely work..
floria
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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I wonder what I'd do without His strength to
get me through...superb Poem ERica!
and the rhyme is impecable...lovely work..
floria