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I am at a bon fire
Teens like me all around..
Everyone drinking
talking
laughing
living..
Except me..
I sit
I am mesmerized
by the fire..
Watching the flames
lapping towards the sky
Listening as it crackles..
As if it is talking to me..
this fire..
this beauty..
this living entity
it beckons me..
Come into my flames..
I am safe and warm..
I will protect you..
Through me you can be reborn..
Let me take you..
Let my inferno save you
I stand..
I walk slowly into the flames..
I am yellow and orange
I am strong
I feel no pain..
I burn to nothing..
Now I am but ashes
on the cold ground..
Until the wind comes
and carries my ashes..
to places I want to be
To playgrounds
with laughter
To mountains
To trees
To large open fields..
I mingle with seeds..
Now I am part of every season..
winter, fall, summer, and spring..
Suddenly I am growing..
a radiant flower ..
alive once again.
Now I am part of many..
No longer am I alone..
I now have a family..
and nature is my home.
Mesmerizing. Painful, but oh-so-easy to relate to. Teens feel things on such a different level than adults, deeper and more intense. Good writing here, Erica.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
a phoenix flower
Jack
~Sanilnath
Erica, this is it.
Beautifully written, and the last 4 lines...bravo!
-James