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Over Something You Know Nothing Of... My Love
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
  
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We have all been through this..


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You crushed me..
Hurt me..
Deserted me..
with your love..
Just don't lie ..
Close your eyes..
to something you know nothing of..
Stop pretending ..
you need mending
needing space.
to much on your plate..
When I know ..
you just lie..
close your eyes..
to something you know nothing of..
Afraid of good byes..
Afraid of your own lies..
Afraid to end up alone..
Afraid to lose what you own..
Stop deceiving..
In your own lies believing..
And closing your eyes..
telling your lies..
about something you know nothing of...
You think you know me..
Or maybe you just won't..
You are afraid of what you know..
Scared of what you don't..
So you go on..
believing and deceiving..
Not caring it is my heart you are leaving..
So as you buried my heart..
no funeral .. no grave..
not a single word do you say..
You just left me
deflated..
Feeling hated
Not a chance to debate it..
Simply excommunicated ..
from your life..
You just closed your eyes..
believed your lies..
about something you know nothing of..
Me..
It's me you know nothing of..
and your fear ... is the cause..
You close your eyes..
tell yourself your lies..
over something you know nothing of..
simply cause
your afraid of love..
..............something you know nothing of!!!

ERICA



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 Reviews of "Over Something You Know Nothing Of... My Love"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
excellent piece! is he dead or just sleeping?

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
nice write the opening lines and middle are strong

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
This moves along so smoothly.....Wonderful...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
ooooo!!! girl this is a great write wish I said it all like you did......I now this all tooooooo well
love
tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Wonderful poetry...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Erica,
Excellent you have not missed a phase.
peg

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Wonderful poetry.

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
You are spot on, to my mind it IS that feeling of deflation which pains the most. great write! Mal.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
A really great piece Erica, in rhythm, pace and content. I love it!
Chrissie

Reviewed by David Leigh (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Great write Erica. Have you tried reading this to RAP MUSIC? It goes quite well.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
"So as you buried my heart..
no funeral .. no grave..
not a single word do you say..
You just left me
deflated..
Feeling hated
Not a chance to debate it.."

This is very very wonderful write...i like this much....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Great write, Erica, A lot of truth in what you say

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Wow...
amazing and excellent lines here and the pace was fantastic!!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
You really do let us get to know you with this write. You are very talented.


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