Hidden Memories (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

each word, every step..just so painful, and so damned beautifully written at the same time, and oh, you, how much a wish for that peace inside... just raw, again and unafraid to speak, and chilling, gave me a chill...peace
within her
yes, hope so much that it is found, dear amazing poet...(((you!)))
((())) <-- many and w/many thanks, also...for you, to you...

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

This shows so much potential for hope!!! I like this one!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

A very deep profound write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Erica, excellent piece of work. It's a hard road.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

A good expression of feeling. Don't you find that the more you write, the more you can release the pain? ~Joseph

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Wow, what a tortuous road you took this reader on, Erica...the utter hopelessness was wrenching.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

So beautiful and soul touching, Erica.Your poetry never fails to move me.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

and may she find peace
josie

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Erica, as always you convey your pain so beautifully.

I have yet to learn of a way to extinguish the pain of memories. I would rather my mind learn to dwell elsewhere within my head. Now if I could only find the teacher.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Erica, This is an excellent write.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Good Morning Erica,
An excellent write!

tony

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Truly wonderful poetry Erica...*Impressed*

Dani

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

"Deep dark memories...
Take bites of her soul..."
Piercing, intensely expressed writing...
Very good, indeed

Reviewed by Heidi Klein (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Nicely written
Heidi

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Absolutely beautiful, Erica.

Reviewed by Joel Young

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

Erica, beautifully written. Well done! :)

Joel

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

ERICA <
"Once she
Could love..
Be loved..
Now distant
in the wake
of the roads
of fate she
has traveled..
Miles and miles..
She has walked..
This road of life..
To find..
She has to stop.. "
Oh so excellent.
Peg