Smile And Laugh Or Crash And Burn (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

lovely....such a moving gift

Reviewed by judeace

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

well done! you have a very open heart...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

You are a true friend Erica. Beautiful write....

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

wonderful write

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Erica,
"Then I will know ..
It is too late
to undo what has been learned..
Too late to save you..
as you crash and burn. "
excellent Peggy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

4-24-03

Very Good To Point,Do-Tell
It Is Why I Say Satan Devil Smiles_Well
I,(God), TRASK Laugh Last_

Pain, Face It Or You Will Crash N Burn_
No One Can Help Anyone Until That One Person Learns To Help Your Ownself 1st_

Truly, There's Nothing Funny In This World
Today, Then,Tear's Will Be Too Late...

TRASK

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

you are not the only one who is beginning to worry over my dark depression and wants me to live life i thank you for caring about people like me who hide our pain and are scared of revealing ourselves you are such a special and sweet person for that

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Excellant testimony to friendship Erica and if this friend is a friend he will be so honored by your work!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Powerful statements here well done..!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

very well done

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Erica this is awesome...I too can email a friend and sense the troubling spirit in them...my friends are amazed...it is a sensitivity that is a gift...you are a good friend Erica...glad you put it into words for us to read....Floria

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

You are a good friend.

Reviewed by Little Miss...

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Erica...
A beautiful testimoney to friendship ;)

Jilly & John

Reviewed by Anthony Yaccovacci (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

well done!

Anthony

Reviewed by Heidi Klein (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Erica ... this is beautiful. Sometimes the hardest thing to do is let our loved ones live out the decisions they have made in their lives. You did a spectacular write.
Heidi

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Very touching sentiments expressed in this piece, well done :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Singingbrooke

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

I hope this person sees what true friedship is all about. Friends can see into the heart.. past the tears..into their fears.. and will stick by you.. May he see this

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Just as powerful and caring as the first post, Erica! Great write of the meaning of "caring'! :)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

This was very moving, I know this feeling of not knowing what to do, hang back, or say something, I think you must be a very good friend to understand and want to help him, I hope he does let you...

This one hit close to me,
Excellent and so caring,

Reindeer