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Remix of a repost.. besides.. Thought this clipart fit perfectly.. Couldn't resit.
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Distorted perceptions
of who I am..
My mind always
changing..
This way..
No..
That way..
Maybe no way
Is the best way..
What do you want?
I don’t know..
What is love?
I am not sure..
Who loves you?
No one
I think..
But I don’t know
the meaning..
How am I to say?
My distorted perceptions..
I think..
I am..
Moving up..
Getting over..
Trying hard..
To find I am
Falling down..
Going fast..
Nothing lasts
Hit by the
reality
Of the delusion
I created..
With my
distorted perceptions..
Of this life..
I am debating..
Can’t believe
My own eyes.
Cannot trust
My own heart
So confused..
Torn apart.
It is death..
I have courted..
Wondering why..
Hope was aborted..
S p o n t a n e o u s l y
It seems...
I am coming apart
at the seams..
I am enclosed
in the dark
But I feel the
warmth of light..
How am I to know..
To sit..
To fight..
Am I to guess?
What’s wrong..
What’s right..
Distorted perceptions..
Makes me wonder..
Keeps me guessing..
As I figure out
The truth..
In this life filled
With misconceptions.
Of these
My
distorted
perceptions.
It flows directly to the lake of knowledge and then on to the sea of imagination breaking waves of questions and making foam of thoughts blown by the winds of imagination and extracting "Perceptions Of Me" again.
"Perceptions Of Me" is a sample of poetical richness and a Poetry´s Art.
I love this poem for what it says, and how you expressed those emotions I seem to feel so well,
Excellent, just excellent,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
How cleverly you have made this wonderful piece so accessible.. who among us cannot find him/her self somewhere in this? The pic is a very effective addition to the words.. you have provoked thoughts and moved my sense of self.. seems to me, that's what we all hope to do here.. great stuff! katy.
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
This was fabulous! The picture and poem are wonderful.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
Dear Erica, Your caring and nice, And your life will better too! ILove the way you descripted this writing. Your an excellent writer too!
I am like your picture...what you see on the outside is not whats inside.....like the saying...never judge a book by its cover....and never ever by who loves you...love does not hurt love does not steal..and most of all....love will never tell you a lie..
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
And when you look upon this reflection, see a Erica that is indeed a precious daughter of the universe that is so loved by the divine..
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
~Nikki~
"Perceptions Of Me" is a sample of poetical richness and a Poetry´s Art.
I Salute the Author of "Perceptions Of Me".
Andre Emmanuel bendavi ben-YEHU
Chrissie
you are loved
Excellent, just excellent,
Reindeer
Love
tony
Love
Tinka
Peace forever, Dove ~