Serpent Green Eyes Looking Through Blue (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Exquisite in its honest depth and perception, Erica, bringing your past full circle in the making of You, a lovely, caring, sensitive individual who can so touch people with your words. I love this piece, wish I had penned it. I let the green-eyed monster loose years ago, just as your piece so eloquently states. Hugs to you. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Excellent piece Erica
So well written

William

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Erica,
Great! Will look at snakes very differently now.

Many Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Very creative. Bravo.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Glad you conquered the Green Eyed Monster. I've tusseled with him a time or two.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Wooah ! Coiling good write !

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

This was lovely, so very lovely!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

You,Erica...always, always so honest...I love this, it sneaks and coils around the reader, in a way...until we see you free and those beautiful blue eyes glowing with the passion and gift you write with...and you ARE!!!
(((you)))
michele

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

... Emotions are waves over the sea of the hearts, colliding each other until they become foam

and are blown by the winds of perceptions and mingle with the clouds of imagination to be

transformed into dews of revelation and drop themselves into the pot of poemization to be

mixed with knowledge and poetized with words that define their vibration into "Serpent Green Eyes Looking Through Blue".

I have enjoyed this poem. A true expression of the inner picture of a heart photographed when the naked soul left the shower box of tears.

I Salute the Author of �Serpent Green Eyes Looking Through Blue�.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Hey girlfriend this one has a strike to it {{smiles}} excellent
"Coiling itself
Around my heart..
Until it felt hollow..
Stone cold.. "
Peggy

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Very unique and individual, which brings its own truth out even more to shine in the darkness. Many of us can agree and relate well with this poem and its oddball aspects (just joking ;) everyone). I thorougly enjoyed it because it was beautifully true and held so much anger... but it didn't feel like an angsty poem, but more a poem full of hope and faith in one's own self... which is something that is becoming more beautiful everyday. It's a tragedy, really, that not everyone can find hope and faith in themselves as you've led us here to believe of you in this poem, today. Brilliant.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Aaaaahhhhh!!!!!......This was nice indeed! I like how you led the readers to the journey of your mind, right 'til the very end which was a happy ending, I think I like this.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

i really like how your poetry flows...

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Creative piece Erica. Very well done.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Clever poem.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Okay, that picture freaked me out and I got scared and hid from you, but only for a moment. kidding