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Color Blind Eyes
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Keeping my head above water..
Breathing in sand..
Swimming in this vast ocean..
Yet drowning on land..
Flying without wings..
No legs to stand..
Waiting for hope..
As she holds out empty hands..
She wants to dream in color..
It is something she cannot do..
Her world is black and white..
Colors never bleed through..
Maybe one day she will capture ..
the sunshine..
In her mind..
Maybe one day..
She will stop living ..
as if she is blind.
She only wants the hope
that dreams can bring..
This dream of color ..
could help her live again.
Until then
she is a..
black and white girl..
Living in a
color drenched world..
Waiting for her turn to
fly..
Into heavens vibrant
skies.
Waiting for God
to notice..
The girl with..
color blind eyes.



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 Reviews of "Color Blind Eyes"
Reviewed on July 7, 2003
This was so beautiful, I loved that last line so much,

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
GREAT to see your work again Erica! This is a poignant, thought provoking well written piece that speaks in great volumes! Color Blind Eyes..hmmm maybe, BUT DEFINITELY NO COLOR and CHARACTER missing in this write!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
A beautiful picture to compliment your beautiful words.

Nancy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
your work is always so gripping and meaningful, wonderful Erica! Good to see you!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
This write grips your very soul...beautifully done. ~Z~

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Beautifully written empathetic piece. Touching.
Leland

Reviewed on July 6, 2003
"Color Blind Eyes" brought messages throughout the flowing lines and is striking the veins of hope and understanding.

I have learned for my mind and have ate for my soul. "Color Blind Eyes" is a poem that speaks out a reality and teaches perseverance.

I Salute the Author of "Color Blind Eyes" with my flag of respect and admiration.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
This one touches the soul. Great write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Wonderful work, Erica. Bravo.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Really touching...and beautifully wrought...Loved this one Erica...thanks, Dani

Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Awwww Erica! This is sad and beautiful write! I like how you have used a color blind girl living in a colorful world to describe how this girl feels - everything is colorless around her.

Creative write indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Very beautiful girl....God noticed you the day you were born.......never forget that....for some it just takes a little longer to realize that sweetheart!! OKAY!!
But this is a beautiful COLORFul write!!!

Welcome backkkkkkkk!!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Very, very poignant and beautifully written.
~Chrissie


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