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Crash And Burn
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
  
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I fear for you at times..
Always pretending life is fine..
I hear your pain in your laugh..
Do you think you can fool..
The one who fools you?
But you laugh..
.Knowing it's a lie.
.Knowing the pain you try to escape..
Knowing it is to late
to undo what has already been learned..
Smile and laugh
or
crash and burn.
I feel your needs..
Your need to hide..
To feel in control.
.To fool everyone..
Your successful goal..
I want to hold you..
Make this time of pain fly away..
But I am just a friend..
Who knows how you feel..
Who can hear the pain through the laughter..
Even as I laugh with you..
Because it is our way..
To survive or die..
It is to late to undo
what has already been learned..
Smile and laugh..
or
crash and burn.
No tears..
Just smile..
As we cry inside.
.Wish I could take your pain..
I would laugh it away..
I would gladly do this for you my friend..
To save you from the fate I fear..
That one day your laughs
Will turn into tears..
Then I will know ..
It is to late to undo
what has already been learned..
Too late to save you..
as you crash and burn.


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Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2003
I feel your needs..
Your need to hide..
To feel in control.
.To fool everyone..
Your successful goal

I love the beat and rhyme here!

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
one thing about a great write is that one feels as if it was written for them...very good!!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
An outstanding write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
A wonderful write,
enjoyed reading

William

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
true friend in the writing... very good

Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Wonderful write and very heartfelt
hugs
Lady G.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Outstanding..powerful and caring.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Fantastic write full of heart and caring. With a friend like you, your friend has a good chance :-)

Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Stay strong for your friend which this write exemplifies.... thank you...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
'A friend in need is a friend indeed!' I, for one, would count myself blessed in having a friend like you..bless you Erica..you are truly an Angel!
{{hugs}}
Vesna

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
I'll echo Jerry's comment and hope no one crashes and burns.
Leland

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Oh, maybe your prediction will not come true. Maybe whoever it is you wrote so eloquently about will "fine" his/her way.


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