If You Really Want To Know (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 23, 2003

A wonderful and thoughtful poem.Nowadays v all face the same problem.v have to pretend happiness while our mind roar...good write and would like to know more abt your thoughts...

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

a wonderful write

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

..Erica..this is outstanding!!! What a soul!!!..YOU..I would LOVE to meet in person..hmm..what a talking session we'd have...keep 'em coming...
Much love to you,
Vesna

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Erica...this is solid in its depth and traverses the distance to thaw out any residual frozen emotion. Very well done.
Amor

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

I am standing up to give you applauses my friend....excellent!!!!!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

"If You Really Want To Know"... I am speechless!

This poem, "If You Really Want To Know" Flows to the sea of reality through the riverbed of knowledge and wisdom.

I Salute You, Author Poet Erica Ivory.

HAPPY HEALTHY DAY!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

very emotive and powerfully written...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

Very emotional.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

A strong write of emotion and images Erica!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

This is true poetry, the kind that makes every emotion move!No matter how often it's read! Bravo Erica!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

A very strong write of emotion and images. Great write!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

This reminds me of my own, "Poet's Live Alone."
I hope we can find something better in common.
John

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

So beautifully written and expressed, I can relate so well,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

OOoh, I loved this line:
"So I am but a sculpture..
of what you want
in me."
A superb ending to a richly emotional piece.

Julie

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

Erica, it takes a very insightful soul to see these images. Especially if you are referring to yourself. I seem to picture you as a warm and gentle heart. One that has been broken and is now trying to put the pieces back in place. It will happen. You just have to keep working at it. Great write. ~SH~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

This is profoundly meaningful and one for my library.Your writing could never fail to touch.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

Once again, you out did yourself...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

Good write Erica. Many of us wear masks:

Some, for protection of ourselves;
Some, for fooling others and themselves.

Good write indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)