Excellent Erica! This poem definitely appeals to ones consciousness. It has the potential to make people think twice before making final decisions. It was also quite vivid and well written.
Best Regards,
Dolores Dawes,
Author of the following children/teen mystery novels:
"A CHILD'S INTUITION"
"WHO'S YOUR HERO"
Erica, this is so sad. And what makes it worse is that there are multitudes of children like yourself that have those same thoughts and wonderments. It would have been just as awesome if you had written it today, as it was when you were twelve. Lisa
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
The message in "Do You Ever Wonder Who I am" strikes social responsibilty and humanity.
A stimulating reading from an outstanding WRITING.
Keep sharing Your feelings. You make me think.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
Best Regards,
Dolores Dawes,
Author of the following children/teen mystery novels:
"A CHILD'S INTUITION"
"WHO'S YOUR HERO"
What a precocious child.
John