Looking For Forgiveness In The Shadows Of My Dreams (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

Blessings my sister in spirit your script is powerful and your spirit is strong. Continue to speak within the armor of your pen. Blessings be upon your house.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

This is a very profound write, Erica. Fantastic repost with so many great lines of remembrance.
Amor

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

You write from the soul
And the rest can understand
The way that you feel

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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

incredibly well written...

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

This is just so incredible.
You have touched so many with such depths.
What power was given you.
Blessings and good wishes,
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

This is one of your best writes Erica, and I know the heartwrenching of it for you. I agree with Vesna!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

Your work always touches me deeply Erica!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

..my heart breaks every time I read this Erica..It seems to me sweet friend , that you have made amends..there is NO need to continue the search...if anything, we know that we are all ONE thus the one that we need to commune with is within our own Being..please ,do not underestimate the power of LOVE..it quenches the thirst,the hunger...it eliminates all guilt..please remember that our scenarios are predestined and that what we all need to learn is accomplished even though our ego gives us hell demanding a SENSED forgiveness...forgiveness does NOT need to be felt..it happens because we are loved so much...our dear ones that pass over do not want us to be in pain of any sort..they know that all is LOVE..please allow them to hold you in it.
Thankyou for this most precious work..it goes into my library!
Vesna oxoxoxox

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

profound, deep, and beautiful. An excellent write.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

Amazing depth you have in your writes Erica!

Debashish

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

Wonderful poetry, truly inspired..Imagery is awesome..There are so many lines to love in this beautiful piece..Thanks for sharing this Erica!

Justin