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One Last Victim
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
  
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Ironic


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He watches her..
Everyday..
Following her to school
Studying her routine..
Staying far enough away
not to be seen..
He watches through her
window at night..
As she sleeps..
In her litlle pink bed
tucked in tight..
She know not
of this predator..
Who lurks in shadows
out of sight ..
She know not of the threat
to her young life..
He sweats as he watches..
Dreams of when
she will belong to him..
Dreams of all he will do..
Hands shaking in anticipation..
To see the look on her face..
To know she will die
in his embrace..
He followed her one day..
When into the woods
she went to play..
She sensed him in
the breeze somehow..
She ran as fast as her
little legs would go..
She ran so fast
she didn't see..
The cliff that loomed
behind the trees..
He chased her through
the woods with fury..
She screamed as she fell
Landing on jagged rock..
Her predator..
Blind with want
also jumped
through the trees..
His chosen prey..
Now a mere five feet away..
He watched her take
her final breath..
He smiled
One last victim
before his death.  
 
 


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 Reviews of "One Last Victim"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
a chilling write that is painful to read for me, because of a child involved. Though it is well done Erica!You do these extremely well due to your own experience...

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
great WRITING, Erica!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Hot N Diffferently Done So!

TRASK

Reviewed on November 15, 2003
there is a time when she actually senses his presence & intent, what it is she knows he knows & it is against her, for me the ist & ii nd part could have been more developed around that, drawing us into the weird nature of the relationship & itīs predatory circumstances, v difficult to do, but a good effort

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Terrific spell binding write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Excellent, chilling piece.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Gary Gebert
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Very, very disturbing subject, but reality we need to think about. I had to read from start to finish before I had a chance to think. You caught my attention. Keep your children close!

P.S. You know there are alot of woodland up here!

Gary

Reviewed on November 15, 2003
chilling! :( (((HUGS)))

Reviewed on November 15, 2003
This was sad, but I'm glad there will not be any more victims.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Hey! Liked the ending. Yep.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Haunting write Erica!!

The pic gives me tha creeps!!

What is that??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Hauntingly real.

Reviewed on November 15, 2003
entertaining Erica but sounded like halloween to me. cheers G

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Gave me cold chills, toooo real for comfort, well done.


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