remix repost.. I am not good at romance but I try once in a while..
When you dream.. Dream of me.. Imagine me in splendor Like you remember me to be Imagine I am wearing my long shimmering gown.. White silk fluid cascading .. Cligling to my body.. Accentuating every curve Dream of my porcelain skin Skin you once said was as soft as angels wings.. Red full lips.. Hot as flames.. A smile that is alluring Secretly calling out your name.... Moonlight glistening through my auburn hair.. Waiting for your fingers.. to caress with tender care.. Most of all Dream of my eyes.. Like crystal blue ice to quench your thirst.. Dream of me.. Sensual.. Spiritual.. Enlightened.. Compassionate. Then when I am every mans dream.. Dive into the cool crystal blue waters of my eyes.. That are meant only for you.. Do not be afraid.. Let the tides take you.. Do not struggle.. Know that this love is your destiny. If you dream this .. Stop trying to fight.. Perhaps one day .. You will dream me.... back into your life. Then you will finally see.. Fate is our reality.. Just dream my love.. Dream Dream of me.
~ERICA
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Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
Like hell you can't write romance. You may not like to write it but this one proves you can. I've know women who have said exactly what you did, to me, with their eyes only. Nice flow, too. Erica, try two of my best poems: Long Gone Love and Journey. Maybe Willow, too. Let me know what you think. Thanks for the poem. Jerry
since you put it in such lovely form and verse I think I will. of course while the dream is running I'll have to close the theater because my wife is real nosy. smiles and cheers G
Ahh, Erica. You have pushed Sensuality to new hights, and not come up wanting.
A well constructed piece, with meaning that gets the message across to the reader.
Bravo, Encore'
Robin
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Great flow of thought that makes it easy for guys like me to read and imagine at the same till ;p
Gary
Love Tinka
Dive into the cool
crystal blue waters
of my eyes..
A well constructed piece, with meaning that gets the message across to the reader.
Bravo, Encore'
Robin
Quite a dream.
John
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)