Beautiful phrasing in this poem, Andy. "Sunrays filter through leafy trees merrily wild flowers salsa with the breeze bee’s sweet talk the dancing flowers a stream trickles downwards nourishing a lake" ....stunning ......

Anna

This is a visual feast, very beautiful, all the best, Ava

Your words Andy are romanticizing love
tenderly caressing
Beautiful!
Vickie

I like it erupted LOL...
WTG...xx Ch'erie

I find the imagery that you have shared absolutely enchanting, Andy. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis

tripping along nicely with the first 8 lines... then I tripped up flat on my face with the final couplet. ???Que??? To me it was like an unforeseen storm emerging, and I was confused that "she" was "contented" about it. Maybe I'm not au fait with the various applications of "Cambrian"... hang on... deja vu... have I said all this before... have you posted this before??????!!! So is this Italian idyll or an emergent Miss Marple... still waters running deep and wotnot... ??? xx

Andy, promise looms large and tranquility lingers peacefully in your write my friend -- refreshing in the frigid weather of Delaware in December -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Absolutely tranquil and spiritually moving...

Be always safe,
Karen

I like it. However Cambrian dragonflies were big enough to eat them birds...hence cacophony??? Patrick

Lovely work Andy. Images are vivid and open a vista of beauty. Enjoyed.

Love th imagery in this gem, Andy!

Love,
tiggs

Very well done, Andy.

An interesting poem! and the picture is so very beautiful!
Well written Andy, thanks for sharing!



Blessings,
Margaret

P.S. You have a sense of humor! You made me smile today. Thanks!

Beautiful. A nice warm feeling for a cold day.

John

Beautiful Andy! Thank you.
With Love,
Cindy

Minus 41 (Celsius or Fahrenheit, take your pick) hardly put you in the mood for lakes, enchanted or not. And then, there's that blasted wind blowing from Siberia to make you run for a roaring fireplace and a bottle of Captain Morgan Dark Rum! cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers!!!...hic!

Georg

Beauty trickles down through these lines...spreading sunshine with the warm images.
Cryssa

Oh, Andy this is just beautiful! Makes me wish I was there alongside that lake!

Andy,

JUST. What I needed on this frosty 14 degree morning, a burst of warmth! Well done, and thank you. :) Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

a beautifully composed write Andy
so "summery" sound warm and serene
but its very cold here 16 degrees
your words brought a breeze of warmth
peace be with you

William