There should be no cringe factor here my friend. Keep your cringe file open and share it with us. "In The Rain" is a wonderful poem. Love and peace to you my friend. Jon Michael
THIS POEM SUBSTANTIATES A FACT; THAT ALL OF NATURE...WAS CREATED WITH US IN MIND. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, IN FAITH, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
This poem has a likable simplicity to it that is clever, but also incites deep thought. I especially like the line about thunder "shouting out its plot" and birds "not having to think about where they get their next drink". Also, the line "another nature's millionaire" is a golden phrase that is clever and fully understood. Deep, friendly, passionate and witty... an insightful and well-executed poem.
This is stunning, and such an uplifting poem!
And I know, I feel so at home in the rain. I like to be barefoot in a downpour, and you have to agree it is inspiring to listen to ~
or if I have to cry I appreciate a storm to be in, it's like God is having a cry too.
Blessings,
Christine
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Anna
I don't think you have to 'cringe'. It's a very beautiful nature poem.
Mary
*hugs*
with strong approach and fine atmosphere.
John
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Regis
Be always safe,
Karen
And I know, I feel so at home in the rain. I like to be barefoot in a downpour, and you have to agree it is inspiring to listen to ~
or if I have to cry I appreciate a storm to be in, it's like God is having a cry too.
Blessings,
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.