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In The Rain
by Andy James Turner → (All Poetry by Andy James Turner)
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Crickey, dug up and recycled one of my first poetic efforts back in 02. Ain't it funny how we think our early work is cringe factor.

When I’m in the rain
I can’t remember my name
My only thought as I lie on the grass
Is when people rush pass

I hear them moan
In their overtone
I love it here all alone
As I look to the skies
Raining soft needles in my eyes

The rain blows through my hair
Washing away all despair
I have no more care
Another nature’s millionaire

Seeing lightning give all it’s got
As I hear thunder shout out its plot
When I’m in the rain
Seeing mother nature’s not tame

I just do not want to go
Now I wish that it would snow
As creation gets a wash
The flowers start to grow

Birds flying in the know
They don’t have to think
About their next drink

Then the sun comes out to play
As if it’s given birth to a new day
As I kneel here and pray
Thanking God for life being this way.
  

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 Reviews of "In The Rain"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
There should be no cringe factor here my friend. Keep your cringe file open and share it with us. "In The Rain" is a wonderful poem. Love and peace to you my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed on September 24, 2010
Dig up a few more Andy, this is wonderful.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
good one, mate ... written quite well ...

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 22, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
THIS POEM SUBSTANTIATES A FACT; THAT ALL OF NATURE...WAS CREATED WITH US IN MIND. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, IN FAITH, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
A very lovely poem, Andy, I'd be proud if I wrote it;-)!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
I think it was very nicely done, Andy! I love nature poems and there are some very nice phrases in this one..

Anna

Reviewed on September 21, 2010
Andy,

I don't think you have to 'cringe'. It's a very beautiful nature poem.

Mary

Reviewed by Yandiswa Molose (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
Awesome Andy

*hugs*

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
Spiritual and beautiful....nature, no matter what the weather has so much to offer...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
Delicate 'raindrops keep falling...' Andy
with strong approach and fine atmosphere.

John

Reviewed by Brandon Petit
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
This poem has a likable simplicity to it that is clever, but also incites deep thought. I especially like the line about thunder "shouting out its plot" and birds "not having to think about where they get their next drink". Also, the line "another nature's millionaire" is a golden phrase that is clever and fully understood. Deep, friendly, passionate and witty... an insightful and well-executed poem.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
Hi Andy, I think this poem was lovely. Nothing to cringe about here.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
I find much of nature (including wind and rain and snow etc.) very rejuvenating and thoroughly therapeutic. Thank you, Andy. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
Such reverent overtones is this magnificently delicate piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
Nicely done, Andy.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
This is stunning, and such an uplifting poem!
And I know, I feel so at home in the rain. I like to be barefoot in a downpour, and you have to agree it is inspiring to listen to ~
or if I have to cry I appreciate a storm to be in, it's like God is having a cry too.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on September 20, 2010
A beauty, Andy, well done, thanks for resurrecting 'In The Rain.' =]

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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