Made me sad Andy yet it has some truth~! I lost energy reading this and my hope is a good tax return and that I don't slip on the ice here in the USA from the weather we are currently having. I hope I don't have to be taken by ambulance on a stretcher and end up in that wheelchair from your last line,I felt this poem, pull and tug at my stomach.
I am thinking on the positive and hope your plethora of words speak more uplifting to our souls!
You are an amazing writer to make a person feel the soul!
Teresa
Realise it's all an illusion, a creation the matrix...It's Red pill time buddy...Arrange another 'poets on the doings' with Kate and I'll bring some with me. ;) Well penned Andy.
Andy, you've captured the essence of what I personally have termed, 'the plastic people' of modern society - nothing matters but their personal desires - the human race appears to be void of the need and understanding for value programming for the greater whole, mankind - without the roses to smell, what is there? - you've done an outstanding job of poetically summarizing this scenario - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
This is stunning writing Andy!
I'm gazing, listening to the trees until my last breath. I don't want to be normal, and I would rather be poor than join the rat-race.
Blessings,
Chris
Thoreau wrote that, “Most men lead lives of quiet desperation.” The masses are on a treadmill of ritualistic behavior, mostly in search of money, but off in search of passing the free time they have, unable to smell the roses.
Your poem rings very true for most. Poets and dreamers are exempt, of course. ;-)
This is one somber poem of what life is like in darkness with no hope.
It's good news that some see past the walls of prison and truly experience freedom as id on angelic wings with the Lord Jesus Christ. Amen
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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Regis
Always,
Deborah
I am thinking on the positive and hope your plethora of words speak more uplifting to our souls!
You are an amazing writer to make a person feel the soul!
Teresa
No time to dream upon the hay
Or hear our children laugh and play
So sadly true, for so many today.
which you write *Andy*
but praying the light
will break through..
Lady Vivian
I'm gazing, listening to the trees until my last breath. I don't want to be normal, and I would rather be poor than join the rat-race.
Blessings,
Chris
Cheers,
Dan
a strong delivery, Andy
john
Your poem rings very true for most. Poets and dreamers are exempt, of course. ;-)
Ron
It's good news that some see past the walls of prison and truly experience freedom as id on angelic wings with the Lord Jesus Christ. Amen