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I was inspired by Lori's poem When

WHEN I WAS A YOUNG MAN IN THE CITY
I HAD MANY CHANCES TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF
BUT I LACKED THE WISDOM TO CONTROL YSELF
I DEVELOPED SMOKING AND DRINKING HABITS
I SPENT ALL MY INCOME IN LUXURIOUS ACTS
I THOUGHt I COULD SAVE WHEN I SATISFIED MY NEEDS
BUT MY NEEDS WERE NOT COMING TO AN END
ANY TIME I MET ONE, ANOTHER WAS COMING UP

NOW I HAVE REACHED THE AGE OF WISDOM
TIME HAS TAUGHT ME TO BEHAVE DECENTLY
BUT I AM AN OLD MAN WITH FRAILING HEALTH
I AM NOT AS PRODUCTIVE AS I HAD BEEN BEFORE
MY CHANCES TO RE-BUILD LIFE ARE VERY SCANT
WHEN I HAD THE STRENGHT
I DID NOT HAVE THE WISDOM
NOW I HAVE THE WISDOM
BUT I DON'T HAVE THE STRENGHT

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 Reviews of "WHEN"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 7, 2005
Great thoughtful poem Abdi Noor!

Eileen

Reviewed on September 6, 2005
Good job on this poem...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 6, 2005
those last four lines are so, so true, aren't they? also loved your lines: "But my needs were not coming to an end / any time I met one, another was coming up." lots of wisdom here and, I daresay, a fair amount of strength to rebuild your life and the life around you. Write on! Dawn


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