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Crooked Ice
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Jack loves Jane to extent that he wishes to be her umbrella to protect her from snow and enjoy the warmth of her tender touch. Jane steps on ice and loses her control a little bit, her fingers hardening the grip on the umbrella.

Jane lost balance
Jack cursed the ice

He wished to be her umbrella
To shelter her from the rain

And to feel her tender grip
As she stumbles over a crooked ice

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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
Yup helping eachother. But helping the fairer sex\and other more vunerable is paramount.... Well written Abdi...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
It doesn't always work out the way we expect it to.
Sometimes our plans change from rain to ice;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
Peter always has the best answer and I agree touch is so important in a relationship with your gal..

Reviewed on January 23, 2006
Humm..Protection from a loving man is paramount. Peace, love, and blessings to you and yours. Mikii

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
Sounds like a parody of Jack and Jill Abdi !
Touch is all important in any relationship !
It forges a bond of trust and acceptance
Peter

Reviewed on January 23, 2006
I didn't understand the last line. I'm so sorry, my mind is still not so clear after my mother's passing. I couldn't explain the last line being there. Was Jane dead already?

Sorry Abdi, I just didn't get it.

Lucky Star Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
Jack helps Jane - as we all should help each other in life.


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