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Just Observe P A I T I A N C E
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I was today interviewed at the US Embassy in Djibouti to get a visa. They rejected on the basis of a justifiable refusal.

Where I expected water
I only found a mirage
Where I expected rain
I found a thick mist
Guess what I mean sir
It is the visa I applied
A big NO was given to me
I could not carry it alone
I thought I needed a Taxi
But that wasn't possible
A bigger space was needed
I tried a pick up 4WD
Even though we squeezed in
Still there was no space for NO
Thinking of what I should do next
An idea dawned on me like daybreak
It brightened my soul with delight
Paitience was the vehicle I needed
I and my NO fitted so well inside
And had a fantastic ride to my house
When NO explodes in your face
Don't lose your tempers easily
Just observe P A I T I E N C E 

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Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
I hope that you can understand their reasons which I hope they could explain to you. Lady J

Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Thanks dear AD friends. I appreciate your support and concern

Reviewed on July 17, 2007
(((HUGS))) love and prayer--

I'm sorry the US refused the Visa of a peacemaker.

Read my poem: the scarves arrived, thank you. They're BEAUTIFUL!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on July 17, 2007
So sorry, you are ever in my prayers. Just keep the faith; hope things work out. God be with you, dear (((Brother)))!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend/sister in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Got the scarves today; thank you ever so much! Beautiful!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
So sorry,I truly hope things work out for you...HUgssssss

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
I am sory for this inappropriate decision on your visa application. It was my hope to listen to your wisdom and insight. In fact, I was making arrangements for your welcome party here in Columbus so that we can be together to discuss peace and reconciliation in Somalia.
I am sorry for this unfortunate decision and I beleive that you are the most deserving human being on earth for a travel visa.
Your attitude is amazing. Just Observe Patience.
Thank you brother.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
I don't understand why Abdi Noor!!I'm sorry to hear this! You have a superb attitude, and I think you should try again. Perhaps it will change. I pray it does!

eileen

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Life is full of disappointments, but I admire you for being patient. Victor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Patience truly is a virtue, and it truly is something very much lacking in our hustle bustle 'on demand' world today, but I'm very sorry to hear your news, Abdi-Noor.

Reviewed on July 16, 2007
I too am so sorry Abdi-Noor. I shall not give up hope of meeting you someday. Don't give up. I keep you and yours in my prayer.Love Mikii-n-Baba.

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Sorry but don't give up. I read you loud and clear. (I been there--did that. ///////we all are living in a cut throat society. Keep your eyes on Jesus -- He's been there too for you and me.Marguerite

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
I'm so sorry, Abdi-Noor. I had hoped to meet you in person and I know that the work you would have done here is vital. But...I greatly admire your mature and gracious attitude in the face of disappointment. You are truly a gentleman.

Love,
Susan


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