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Cold Water
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I called my ex-love and she refused to talk to me. (These are the feelings of a friend not mine).

Craving for a touch of love
I sank in the depth of my dreams
To warm a lonesome heart
Tired of long squirmy nights
But every piece of my memory
Melted in the heat of a cold water
As a frozen chill ran through my spine
Leaving me buried in the rubble
Of my past mistakes
I left her when she loved me
Now I have to pay the price





       

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 Reviews of "Cold Water"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 25, 2009
this is the classic style of Abdi-Noor -- a tragedy and love story combined with beautiful expression -- much love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 21, 2009
Yes, powerfully penned, and it brought tears to my eyes. You have penned a very sad poem here Abdi.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 21, 2009
So powerful, especially your last two lines, Abdi-Noor.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 21, 2009
Very, very sad.
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on February 20, 2009
Very well written and with so much emotion. Thanks Abdi-Noor.

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 20, 2009
Sad write my friend. Lessons in life are sometimes hard to swallow.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on February 20, 2009
Sadness in these lines, Abdi-Noor, very well penned. :(

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 20, 2009
Melting in the heat of cold water...a quasi metaphysical experience of a heart which are suddenly abandoned by its warmth and freezes when the cold breath of rejection is the answer to a simple question, "do you love me?"

Georg


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