My girlfriedn Jane has powers to take the shape of animals
An angry bee gave me a chase
I though of a clever way to escape
I wallowed into a murky pond by the roadside
Not so deep was it, though
But had enough water to cover me up
In few minutes my lungs cried out for a breath
with an upward thrust I bounced like a dolphin
only to find out that the bee didn’t leave me alone
A flight-in-waiting was hovering over my body
The face of the bee was quite familiar to me
She was Jane. She was my sweet heart
I knew she had powers to take the shape of animals
But never thought that she would mutate into an insect
Jane was angry with me. She caught me cheating
I begged her pardon to forgive me
Jane was so caring, so loving and so forgiving
She stretched her hand to pick me up
To pull me out from the mud and wasteful waters
I promised not to do that. And I meant it with all my heart.
hmmm...abdi, this is a very interesting, not to mention entertaining, write; thoroughly enjoyed this! thanks for sharing, my friend! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Well I thought for a moment another transformation. Great write Abdi.Amusing too!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Excellently written and much enjoyed! Bill Murray
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
This is wonderful poetry.....
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Hi Abdi...so I guess she didn't sting you....very creative writing here...a very unique poem..I hope she gave you some honey (((grin))) .floria
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Abdi-Noor, when she helped you out of the water had she suddenly changed back into your girl friend? Very interesting concept this ability to change back and forth.
Patty
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very creative, uniquely written piece--very visual :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Patty
Trixie :)